Far Away Poem by foxy babii

Far Away

Rating: 5.0


The thousand miles between us
Have lost there surging power
Your smile has reached me
And made my heart to flower

Tho you may be so far away
I know your right here in me
Your heart has opened mine
You did it without the key

Just a smile from afar
And words that reach in deep
You lifted me up from below
Now my heart thou may keep

You have lit up my life
With the glow from your heart
I would give you the world
Just for the way thou art

By foxy 08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Omar Ali Sabar 08 December 2008

Hey foxy, , , that's a great poem. It's very neat on the page and easy to read, rhymes well and the person in the poem must be very lucky...10/10

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Richard Howardson 07 July 2008

gr8 poem foxy, really touching. 'Your heart has opened mine You did it without the key...' so lovely lines. keep on foxy.

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dripping heart 29 January 2008

speechless.....thank you with all my heart....

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