False Tooth Poem by Mihir Chitre

False Tooth

Rating: 1.5


I can't tell you how half measures
crowded my life after you left.
Always on the brink of this
or that, if the messages I typed
and did not send were people,
they'd give the Chinese army
a run for its money, and probably
ruin themselves too, as people do.
That I waited for you, all over
the world, was only natural but
hanging in there for a whole year
was stretching it. And in two years
I fell off the cliff

only to find out how overrated
reality is. If someday, I could
show you around this world:
you, still prettier than all sunsets,
should have a Sunday to yourself.
We’ll start with a slow cup of tea -
just as you like it – doing nothing
at all. You’ll then get ready
in a quick stroke of an eyeliner,
and I’ll take you to an overwhelmingly
ordinary place, where there’s nothing
external, you know. No friends
to tell you that I don’t suit you,
no fat managers to ask you
what keeps you with me, and
no rules to wrap me.
We’ll go for a walk then,
and I’d love it, if again,
we run short of money, yet
overspend. After conversations
that refuse to end, we retreat
into some place more private.
I light a cigarette, you eat bread
and peanut butter, come closer,
and tell me how long ago your father
picked strawberries in Srinagar, how
you played basketball in school.
And then the conjuring grin,
hustling past your false tooth.

Saturday, April 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: longing,romance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 18 April 2015

I truly enjoyed reading your poem, Mihir. Well done!

0 0 Reply
Fabrizio Frosini 18 April 2015

interesting and well penned poem, Mihir. Your poetic tale flows nicely and gives the reader a clear and honest picture of the feelings involved - Indeed, you have avoided all those mawkishness / sweetish affectations that so often fill love poems.. Really a good poem. Thanks for sharing Fabrizio

2 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success