Fallen In The Line Of Duty Poem by Mir Abid

Fallen In The Line Of Duty

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Fallen in the line of duty,
Fallen with valor facing the foe;
They will grow not old as be remembered ever-
Upon our tears of glory & pride.
Darkest hour of the black night-
Comes just before the dawn as-
We will bring that golden dawn of justice-aginst all the odds that we believe..anyhow but we will succeed.
As the blue stars are known to the dark night-our red martyres will be our stars of hope, our power to destroy the foe...to the end, to the very end...they will remain with us..forever...& ever after..

Fallen In The Line Of Duty
Wednesday, July 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: bravery,patriotism,sacrifice
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mir Abid 09 July 2016

Many Thanks Chinedu Dike for your valuable comment.....

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Chinedu Dike 06 July 2016

Good portrayal of feats of valour in defense of motherland, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction with conviction. Insightful portrayal of patriotism elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Mir. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Mir Abid 09 July 2016

Many thanks for your valuable comment......

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