Fallen Flower.. Poem by Samanwaya Njaaneya

Fallen Flower..

Rating: 5.0


Virginity in her...
Till the last eve...

Limelight of the day-
Metamorphosise her,

Invisible to any beetle....
Until she withers...

Yet tell me the spring-
That dares to do this...

Sumayya Nejoom

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
premji premji 15 July 2008

lovely words Sumayya As Suma means flower, be careful!

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Ershad Mazumder 19 August 2008

A budding flower, not a fallen flower. A very sweet piece.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 August 2008

yet all that happens to happen by metamorphosis that very beautry of nature when crucified by own reeks of cruelty............yet ingenious by the wexpression, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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premji premji 09 June 2009

fallen flower... ah! butterfly...... written by basho

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Surya . 12 May 2009

bold theme and bold poem.beautifull and crisp.posted 10 for u surya

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Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2009

good piece, Sumayya...you articulate very well your thoughts about the untouched withering flower...about the insatiated withering desires of life...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 22 September 2008

A lovely and wonderful poem. Love it.10+

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Kesav Easwaran 18 September 2008

beautiful piece, sumayya...i admire the imaginative mind behind this write...10

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