Fall Of Petals Poem by Mike Vasquez

Fall Of Petals

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Time, there isn't much, there never was
days will pass, as for will the nights
years will go away like the wind
they will only come to hurt you, nothing more

you're a gift from the heavens
you're eyes are purely divine, hard to forget
you smile, like no one can
for every year apart a petal falls
time is critical

together we hold a promising existence
I will never forgo on you
life is brief like a blink of an eye
at last, life will be victorious with you by my side

Tuesday, July 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 08 January 2018

A nice poetic imagination, Mike V. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Rebecca Tidball 02 August 2016

The lines written speak volumes to my narrative thank you I really mean that Rebecca

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Chinedu Dike 12 July 2015

Very romantic train of thoughts, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction from the heart. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THANKS IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 07 July 2015

Love can make time stand still. Thanks, Mike Peace

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 07 July 2015

i love the definite forecast of things. Well done. Thanks for sharing with us. Please read my poem 'The Empress Of My Heart'

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