Fair Called Life.... Poem by shweta advani

Fair Called Life....

Rating: 5.0


There is a master
n there are so many slaves...
The master took pity on the slaves plight
n asked them to go to the fair to enjoy the ride...

He game them the money n the means...
to take the departure flight,
However, predetermined the time of return flight...

He hugged n blessed them..
Coz he knew the fair is enormous n huge...
He wished they did well while enjoyin the muse
The slaves thanked n praised the master
Coz he had given them an opportunity divine
to break the shackles n lead a free life..

Hope that the slaves do well in the Fair of life...
N can please the masters when they return after the ride...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 03 May 2009

are you comparing slaves to humans and master to god or something like that. it doesn't sound that good to me thought. but the poem is well written good work

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 09 May 2009

Perhaps the God is a magician who is performing in a front of audience who is too terrified to laugh.................cheers..............

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a fair in which we get lost too...lovely comparison of life toa fair

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Kesav Easwaran 15 May 2009

a very good symbolic write...'fair' or not the 'Slaves' do enjoy their life here in this world as the Master blessed... and with out particularly worried about their predetermined return flight! 10

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Bob Blackwell 10 May 2009

Freedom to fly and shake their wings must feel great after living in a cage.

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Anjali Sinha 10 May 2009

lovely poem the different hues of life -10 anjali

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C. P. Sharma 10 May 2009

A unique perception about life. I really enjoyed it. CP

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