I Wish.. Poem by shweta advani

I Wish..

Rating: 5.0


I wish u cud see...
what u mean to me...
A tear in ur eye...
makes me cry...
A smile on ur face...
makes me gleam...
A victory of urs..
makes me scream...

But if u can't understand my
silence..
how wud u understand my words...
no matter what I say..
Even if I write a poem for u
or gift u ur fav book..
U wud still have that wooden n blank look..

But I guess everything happens for a reason
n something's u shud not question...
I can only care for u
coz loving u is loving me
n hurting u is hurting me...

I wish u cud see...
what u mean to me...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
tara star 17 May 2009

waw............i loved ur poem....love means to give and it teach us how to sacrifice...no matter wht the other side thinks of u....we should always keep our selves strong....and i think care is the only way tht connect u with ur loved ones....good write..keep writing..

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a blank look from a man should'nt be a surprise...may be we have more muscles on our face...th final line is filled with love...unconditional

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Kesav Easwaran 17 May 2009

love feelings sincere expressed in sweet selective words...good write...10

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Siddharth Singh 18 March 2010

How can such profound feelings go unnoticed? Love is indeed selfless.

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Smiley Hooker 04 June 2009

i can feel your emotions here, dear Shweta. very expressive write! : -)

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Akram Saqib 30 May 2009

great expression of feelings of love

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Abhilash Fraizer 19 May 2009

'But if u can't understand my silence.. how wud u understand my words...' profound lines! speaks a lot!

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premji premji 18 May 2009

love is a double edged sword.................

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