Failed Love Relationship Poem by Shishir kant

Failed Love Relationship

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I
You should not mention this message
This message draw a lonesome passage,
I scatter everything like a savage,
And you gather nothing from the ravage.

II
Is this message impart me?
You do nothing, only the piece of Tee,
Your face haunt me again and again,
But I have nothing gain.

III
Is this book impart you?
NO! this savage attitude impart us.
This was once my curse fate,
That I was no longer your mate.

IV
Really, you are sweet and cute?
But I have, unconsciously tribute.

Failed Love Relationship
Wednesday, February 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 15 February 2017

An insightful depiction of loss of fascination in love, well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Shishir and welcome to Poemhunter.

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Shishir Kant 16 February 2017

I am very grateful for your appropriate words. I am very glad to know that you have read the poem and try to critically evaluate it. thank you very much Sir.

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