Faded On Poem by Harley My Last Name

Faded On

Rating: 5.0


He walked outside today just to see that no one was there.
He closed his eyes then opened them just to see it was still the same.
He searched around for someone, anyone, but he found no one.
He screamed for help but just fell to his knees with no answer.
He started questioning himself saying 'did everyone die and only I survived? '.
He stopped questioning when he reallized he gave his life up for another but only got a Dark Gloomy path that led to another eternity of sorrow.
He cried remembering his final words of 'I want to Fade On'.




My point of this poem is to say that you cant give one life of sorrow and pain for a happy one because you were handed one life to live and one life to remember. I just wrote this poem today but as i was writing I got a phone call saying i missed a call from my brother that i havent talked to for a year,1 month and 17 days. After so much time in life you want to give up but the second you try to give up everything will change and you can be there to enjoy it because you gave up to soon.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colin J... 27 July 2008

We all have to give up sometime... I'm a 60 year old male... But, i live every day to the full... So should you... Another 10. Great poem... Colin J...

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Joshua Decker 22 June 2008

very true and very good. you have a way with words that is quite spectacular.

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