Falling Apart Inside Poem by Harley My Last Name

Falling Apart Inside

Rating: 4.5


She goes through looking as happy as could be. Everyone says 'look at how happy she is', but inside shes falling apart. On the outside she is wonderful but inside shes a wreck.For her going on through this life is a nightmare that she is willing to take. She cant handle anymore judgements people say about her. She falls in love just to crash down. She wonders if her life will ever go the right way. Things happen to her that no one can explain. Shes tired of being the one to cry everytime he hurts her. when she finally moves on from the people in her past she worries about the future. Even when she walks with a frown on her face everyone seems to think shes the happiest person alive. When tears run down her face they are beleived to be tears of joy but truely they are tears of pain and sorrow. Finally she speaks out and says shes 'Falling Apart Inside'.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colin J... 28 July 2008

Great poem, a lot of people feel like this... they just want someone to love them... When they stop feeling that way... they find that they were always loved... Colin J...

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Lacey Unknown 25 May 2008

Good write... it reminds me of a poem I recently wrote... 'They See... I See' I'd appreciate it if you would check it out and tell me what you think. ~Lacey~

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