Eyed Dreams Poem by Nika McGuin
Eyed Dreams
In your wide-eyed dreams
doesn't it all go right?
What about shut-eyed dreams -
do they get entangled in the night?
And reality? Merely a mirror and an unforgiving light.
"Hold on to your dreams! " they say.
Here, I've been trying with all my might.
but loneliness, the true thief of joy,
threatens to ensnare me in a pitiful plight
meanwhile...
Shut-eyed
cross-ankled
I hear the rain
pattering upon fresh blossoms
just beyond my windowsill
and ponder if my dreams
will ever bloom
will ever bear fruit
will ever seed.
A beautiful poem. 'but loneliness, the true thief of joy, threatens to ensnare me in a pitiful plight' - so well said, poetically!
A poem on loneliness. Beautifully crafted. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed the flow and concept.
Write comment. Such a nice poem, Nika M. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
Excellent poem. Maam. The flow the rhymes the mood just right
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Super poem, wonderful and expressed in great metaphor. Dreams and daydreams. Kudos! ! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'Babies cry anywhere '