Adelaide Anne Procter

(30 October 1825 – 2 February 1864 / London)

Envy - Poem by Adelaide Anne Procter

He was the first always: Fortune
Shone bright in his face.
I fought for years; with no effort
He conquered the place:
We ran; my feet were all beeding,
But he won the race.

Spite of his many successes,
Men loved him the same;
My one pale ray of good fortune
Met scoffing and blame.
When we erred, they gave him pity,
But me -- only shame.

My home was still in the shadow,
His lay in the sun:
I longed in vain: what he asked for
It straightway was done.
Once I staked all my heart's treasure,
We played -- and he won.

Yes, and just now I have seen him,
Cold, smiling, and blest,
Laid in his coffin. God help me!
While he is at rest,
I am cursed still to live: -- even
Death loved him the best.

Comments about Envy by Adelaide Anne Procter

  • Gold Star - 28,812 Points Kim Barney (11/12/2015 11:16:00 PM)

    Very nice poem except for the typo on line five:
    my feet were all beeding

    I'm sure that should be
    my feet were all BLEEDING. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,389 Points Adeline Foster (11/12/2015 6:45:00 PM)

    Now, that was cute. Surprise sending. Trymine _ If Only _
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,715 Points Susan Williams (11/12/2015 4:04:00 PM)

    I can only hope this was not autobiographical - what a waste her short life would have been. Absolutely top-notch comments below on this poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,178 Points Leloudia Migdali (11/12/2015 2:27:00 PM)

    Envy! Seeing it everywhere around! What a pity for people! Great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,815 Points Ratnakar Mandlik (11/12/2015 8:13:00 AM)

    Envy is one of the six vices God had embedded in human, His off spring, to keep his feet on ground and to make him realize that he can not compete with his Creator, in spite of intellect given by Him to human.
    Very nicely elaborated. Thanks for sharing.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,735 Points Neran Sati (11/12/2015 5:42:00 AM)

    So nicely penned a common obstacle.. one of those that prompted me to scratch How To Stay Happy? : -) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,563 Points Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/12/2015 4:04:00 AM)

    Oh this was so wonderfully written poem with satire in it....We all Envy in human form.........100++ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,382 Points Seema Jayaraman (11/12/2015 2:50:00 AM)

    Envy.. can be so debilitating.. but being human one cant help compare especially some one next to you gets all the advantages that destiny can shower and you are left comparing all through your life.. thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,460 Points * Sunprincess * (6/2/2014 8:44:00 PM)

    ...........truly this is a great write....and envy is the perfect title...enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 1, 2004

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