Enchanted By Your Eyes Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
Enchanted By Your Eyes
Enchanted are diamonds in bludark sky
By the star's light they treasure in your eyes.
As a loop spiral they dive to recline
Upon your eyes they furnish more with nice,
Calm, shimmering beauty in sublime wide.
Disc silver is envious so of the prime
Tenderness they possess with awing light.
Within I bow to eyes of yours that smile,
In them a crystal soul with gentle vibe.
Tone here is raised as your eyes of life
Season my soul on affection to thrive.
Speeding it is my soul feels on a pike,
Like the star shooting with its tail of fire.
Of galaxy, the garden's scene is ripe.
Note:
Line 1 Bludark, a word I coined, as an adjective it refers to blue and dark, but as a noun, it refers to the sky as the blue darkness.
Line 11 Pike, a word that refers to high motorway.
Truth be told in a poem. I look in my boo's eyes and see safety, love, peace, serenity, and hope...etc....good job.
True love speaks through the eyes.Beautiful piece Obinna.
The eyes have it! Mirrors to the soul. A loving, warm smile connects with eyes that shine. A 'look' can make one excited, or a 'look' can kill. Your poem is enchanting about eyes. Nicely written. DC
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I would like to translate this poem
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Its really a nice poem..you really can see the soul of ones eyes..The love, the gentleness through one' eyes, especially if its smiles. God I like it if someone you love smile at you through their eyes. The feelings of sincere love and affection is really there.