Elysium's Unfathomable Gate Poem by Captain Cur

Elysium's Unfathomable Gate



When soft whispers invisible as air
alight gently on my senses, I feel
the joy creation brings to one amazed
by words that live and strive for better days.

With these whisperings I prepare this verse
may it with effervescent passion burst
through Elysium's staunch and guarded wall.
I to know their voice, the haunting call

of those poets who climbed that fragile bar
and reached beyond the limits of their star.
Guided by faith charged the cold blinding light
foraging in human frailty and strife

not for mere advantage or worldly gain
consumed by fire beheld the eternal flame
and in their works our riches thus increased
exemplifying the nature of belief.

From unfathomable heights fell from grace
then raised high the lowliest to their place
and brought to earth all beauty can endow,
fair messengers whispering from the boughs.

Wednesday, September 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,hope,poet,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 14 September 2018

The beauty of rhyme and rhythm resonates throughout each line in this poem: the beauty of classical poetry!

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Kostas Lagos 12 September 2018

Your poems amaze me every time! Good work Captain!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

Gently in invisible air this thought comes. The place at the ends of the earth to which certain favoured heroes are generally conveyed by certain power after death is the Elysium to which some fear to measure and some try to measure. Guided by faith charged the cold blinding light, we can think about this. Unfathomable Gate of Elysium amazes mind. All beauty to Earth is brought up. An amazing poem is excellently penned.

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