Don’t give time to the time,
Move from place to place
Give time to the one
You adore
Ascend to Elysium
Love is your pace
(2008/5/29)
.....ascendency over time, over love....lovely written...........immortal poetry......
This one is very beautiful. As usual, under you pen, a few words tell far more than the numerous words needed to talk about such a subject. Very well written! 10
Lovely fine penning my friend....you composed this perfectly... thanks for sharing Jon
Lovely write Shiraz! Give time to love and paradise you'll have found! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad
Beautiful words woven together in this piece, I particularly like the line 'love is the pace' well penned, 10 Lynda xx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
my woman recognition of your taste i need i don't have all time to calculate desire less the taste