Elysium Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Elysium

Rating: 5.0


Don’t give time to the time,
Move from place to place

Give time to the one
You adore
Ascend to Elysium
Love is your pace

(2008/5/29)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 May 2008

my woman recognition of your taste i need i don't have all time to calculate desire less the taste

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bjanka im 30 May 2008

.....ascendency over time, over love....lovely written...........immortal poetry......

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M M 30 May 2008

This one is very beautiful. As usual, under you pen, a few words tell far more than the numerous words needed to talk about such a subject. Very well written! 10

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~ Jon London ~ 29 May 2008

Lovely fine penning my friend....you composed this perfectly... thanks for sharing Jon

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Thad Wilk 29 May 2008

Lovely write Shiraz! Give time to love and paradise you'll have found! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Lynda Robson 29 May 2008

Beautiful words woven together in this piece, I particularly like the line 'love is the pace' well penned, 10 Lynda xx

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