Elegy Upon Undoing Love Forever Poem by vittal vandavasu

Elegy Upon Undoing Love Forever

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I cease for the importance of humanity
I know ot if mine was a desire or necessity
The fire had died out
The cold had no more clout

But if I ask will it arouse again
If i am to spot another
Of mine body, soul alike to pain
Will i be able to go on further?

The elegance of love is tarnished by necessity
I know not of amendments
But I can never forget you but can dim
In old ages increments

But will I meet another
I think while watching you go somewhere
Heart is maybe wet leather
It can be thrown anywhere

[ With this poem I end my love I shall rather die then forget. Alas I am a mere spectator as woe plays and celebrates it's might]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zainab Amjad 27 February 2010

Whoever she is, she is a great muse.

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Philip Winchester 11 October 2009

Forget this Girl and Move on. She loses a Good Poet, the Poem I fear Suffers from your breaking heart, Forget this Girl and Move on. Before you do rewrite it to make better sense, then screw into a ball and throw away, Forget this Girl and Move ON. Forget Not you still owe me a Poem. Forget this Girl and Move On make of that the very Title. Kind Regards Philip

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Mystic Indian 10 September 2009

beautiful Ghazal like quality.10/10

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