An Amateur And Paradise Poem by vittal vandavasu

An Amateur And Paradise

Rating: 5.0


I spent a day in the corner of paradise
It thought me how to be a bit wise
I stole an everlasting memory from there
Excited, I ran wild as a hare

It was where the gentle breeze kissed me
It was where trees spoke a strange language
But everything was saying there's love to see
It was an epoch of a blissful age

The clear blue skies suggested purity,
Showing that everything has eternity
It was where ivy was spread,
Where the dew and grass wed

And there were singing songbirds
The merriest of tunes ever heard
Then there's a magical sunset
The place where brightness and darkness met

The twinkling diamonds of stars were scattered in the sky
And the moon hung like a glowing orb
The beauty compels me to cry out aloud why?
Then thinking and thinking it's love I absorb

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 30 September 2009

what a lovely poem...this poem itself has love as its rhythm...a lovely vision of nature...a baby's vision which is filled with love which out pours...this poem inspired me to write one when i post it i will tell you...into my favs

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Zainab Amjad 27 February 2010

I see a beautiful paradise. Any reader would be tempted to have a real glance.

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Salu Salu 11 October 2009

imagination has no barriers..looking forward for ur skyhigh journey...... rgrds/salu

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Philip Winchester 05 October 2009

You write as you have the skills of a Poet of Eighty Years of Age. I read your Prose in Awe you my 'Friend' are truely 'Gifted' It is a pleasure to measure. By the Pupil one can be Taught. Kindest Regards Philip

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Mubeen Sadhika 02 October 2009

Matured language. Nicely composed.

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Eyan Desir 01 October 2009

Very beautiful well wonderfully written.. 10ss

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