Electric Spark Poem by sekharan pookkat

Electric Spark

Rating: 5.0


Venus the most adorable
Goddess of beauty
Is no longer in the world
But live in millions of hearts.

Some poems are cool
And some are hot.
Both are in the same way
As hot as red hot iron.

Naked truths hit
On the affective domain
Rather than cognitive domain
Piercing directly into brain.

Mad clouds explore on
The beauty Goddess
The torrent rain drops heavily
And hit deeply in the hearts.

Metaphors, icons and symbols
Used to express poets views
Of self actualization and realization
And launch poetry as an efficient media.

Likes and dislikes depends
Up on readers mind
Worst or best of its kind
And they promote them.

Venus the most adorable
Goddess of beauty
Is no longer in the world
But live in millions of hearts.

Sunday, July 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 03 April 2016

wonderful words penned on the morning and evening star, always the inspiration for writers and poets by its beauty and love, thanks poet, i enjoyed it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 July 2015

Venus the most adorable Goddess of beauty Is no longer in the world But live in millions of hearts........Of course, she is no more but she is in the hearts of million of people. A great tribute nicely and aptly presented. Many thanks for sharing.

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Hazel Durham 09 July 2015

Beautiful write with lovely imagery and well presented, thanks for sharing!

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Yes. Venus lives in hearts and expresses herself through poetry. Poetry is the sublime art that reveals the heart. Nice write and good food for thought.

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Bharati Nayak 05 July 2015

A great tribute to Poetry Queen ruling over hearts of all all poets.

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