Eerie Mists Poem by Knight Fizzstorm

Eerie Mists

Rating: 5.0


She appeared to me in the Tigress Woods
along the Eerie Mists ravishing stream,
I was without armor in cloak and hood
I was immersed in a clear mornings dream.

Under her brows two curved earth gardened eyes
waif sounds echo trees, stone drums, lyre springs,
awakening nymph outstretched in sunrise
wood winds spiral notes reverberant sings.

Face flecked with twined flower, cheeks of fall leaves,
hair auburn brown, a twig comb, a thorn brush,
love singing song haunting chords travel breeze
feathering the air with lips of pink touch.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sally Plumb Plumb 24 August 2012

This piece transported me to the woods. Beautiful. Thanks.

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Valerie Dohren 24 August 2012

Beautifully descriptive - a lovely write.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 24 April 2018

Loved this. Reminds me of the medieval times in art.

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Heather Wilson 24 August 2012

A very descriptive write, a joy to read.

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Chris Blazo 24 August 2012

A really good use of imagery and imagination! Thank you.

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Dave Walker 24 August 2012

A very beautiful poem, like it.

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Karen Sinclair 24 August 2012

Gorgeously whimsidaisical leaves one feeling ever so chuffed and at peace... lovely write tyvm

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