Monday, December 22, 2008

Early Spring, Autumn Leaves (4 Haiku) Comments

Rating: 3.0

early spring
so many robins
worrying the worms
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Ben Gieske
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Robert Howard 05 January 2009

Lovely and elegant. I enjoy the way the second and third stanzas each carry forward an element from the preceding stanza, Robert

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Anjali Sinha 26 December 2008

lovely haikus robins worrying worms leaves-goodbyes to summer shade and sand questioning fingers great -10 anjali

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