Dying Angel Poem by Invisible Poet

Dying Angel

Rating: 5.0


Lonely Angel sits and begins to weep,
Sad and afraid feeling beyond weak.
Tears from fears fall from her eyes,
All she knows is her disguise.

Beautiful Angel cries for you,
She doesnt know what to do.
Scared of what has been done,
Knowing there really is no one.

Sad Angel feels so much pain,
How can she explain.
Hurt and betrayed again,
All she can do is pretend.

Scared Angel hides inside,
Its the only place she can reside.
Her cheeks wet from neglect,
No one wanted to protect.

Little Angel Lost and afraid,
Keeps herself hidden in the shade.
Disgraced by everyone,
She doesnt know what to become.

Timid Angel shaking within,
Not comfortable in her own skin,
Heart shattered and torn,
All she does is mourn.

Broken Angel completely numb,
She doesnt know if she will ever overcome.
Clouded mind taking over,
Losing herself in this enclosure.

Tearful Angel cries at night,
Knowing she is losing this fight.
Dying inside each passing day,
Wishing it would all end today.

Saturday, March 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 18 February 2018

Heartfelt sad tale told in eloquent finesse. Insightful narrative embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.

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V P Mahur 22 March 2014

Dear Angel, Lovely poem with deep gloomy thoughts. I think this is your first poem here. Keep it up. Congratulations and welcome to this world of poets. regularly check your inbox and 'Manage your comments' page. Thanks! 'Truth of Creation' ........................ ......................

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Thomas Duncky 22 March 2014

This one really sounds like those from the heart. Nice flow of rhythm and clever choice of words. Great piece.

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