Dwindling Away Poem by J.E. Deen

Dwindling Away



dwindling down like dying leaves
severed from all sides
a bond now gone
ever out of reach
as each tries to better their lives

what a pittifull display
one must put on
with short memories
and silent cries

now realizing
what was regrettably
left behind
this mutual feeling
finally dies

Saturday, June 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 14 June 2014

Very interesting way to view the ending of a relationship. Nicely done.

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