During Transformation Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

During Transformation

Rating: 5.0


Any good step taken for development
This is first objected by few
Who are jealous and violent,
They stand against us to destroy,
They attack us severely,
They send message to many others
Not to support any good work and good man
And they severely criticize,
But we are not in way to leave
We are in God's mission of peace.

During transformation we unite
God wants to transform this old world,
Turning time wheel sends the message,
Step taken for comprehensive review
It is beneficial but few do not feel,
God feels this well to explore values,
God has commanded to nurture all in love,
And we feel it in our inner cores,
Greatest nourishment gives us strength.

By God's command, mission of peace works,
We are peaceful warriors marching ahead,
God has properly trained us and guided,
We rightly break injustice and obey laws,
God's laws in nature works perfectly,
Misty falsehood is burnt by sun's rays.

Any tree moves towards sun and gets rays
Sun first burns but empowers with rays
And leaves are transformed in greenness,
During transformation we face obstacles
But God rightly does transformation work
Through us, giving us enlightenment,
God transforms the old world in to heaven.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,23 February 2019. All rights reserved.

During Transformation
Saturday, February 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical ,spiritual,transformation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul 27 April 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 23 February 2019

An extremely inspiring poem about peace, God's guidance and power. How everything falls into place for 'God transforms the old world in to heaven'. You give us hope and beauty, thru your wonderful poetic views and your powerful words and faith. Thank you.

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Dogma Daniman 23 February 2019

Transformation work of life and the world is done by God. Time wheel turns. You have nicely expressed your thought. This is a lovely poem.

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Pushpendra Patel 23 February 2019

Thank you very much dear sir for sharing this nice poem. I have read this at lovely morning. This is a real transformation work. Yes, yes, God does transformation. The cover picture is excellent. It is reflecting transformation work.

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Heather W.B. 23 February 2019

When we take any good step this is initially objected by few but later they realize its importance. We should always carry on developmental works and through God's mission we should spread message of peace. God motivates us for transformation work. A reflective picture is attached to this poem is very nice. I like this poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 February 2019

Thank you very much Sandra Feldman, Dogma Daniman, Pushpendra Patel and Heather W.B. for your valuable visits and comments. I offer my prayer before God for your goodness and fortune.

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Dogma Daniman 08 June 2020

We have to actively take part in transformation period for which we need wisdom to practice. Without wisdom we cannot grow in spiritual world. We have to think rightly and follow righteousness.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 February 2020

Through God's mission we should spread message of peace. God motivates us for transformation work. A beautiful reflective picture is added to this brilliant poem. I like this poem very much. Aptly worded with such nobilty and love. An excellent philosophical poem. Very interesting. A 10 TOP score. God's Blessings in Abundance

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Rebecca Navarre 27 March 2019

Ever such powerful beauty written within these words! .. Beautifully enlightening! .. Very inspirational! ... Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ............................+++++

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Indira Renganathan 13 March 2019

'Any tree moves towards sun and gets rays Sun first burns but empowers with rays And leaves are transformed in greenness, '...wonderful example and explanation...this is the first poem on this subject that I come across....always you think in a different good way...a big 10 and endless +s

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Savita Tyagi 12 March 2019

Misty falsehood is burnt by sun’s rays. All is transformed by god’s grace. Very assuring poem full of faith and hope. Thankyou for Sharing.

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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