Drowning Poem by Valentina Burgeson

Drowning



It hurts...It just hurts
I've been clinging...
but onto what...
Oh, ...
water....
So I guess that means...
I'm drowning? ...
I am, aren't I? ? ...
should I, keep drowning? ...
But this water, ...
I can't...
I don't want to...
let it go...
But I should, ...
the water...
would be happier...
If I swam out of it...
but- n-no...
I don't want to...
I don't want to let it go...
I need it...
I love it...
when it is rain, ...I feel its pain...
When it is a lake...I feel its anger quake...
when it is the ocean...
I know it wants me to let it go...
should I? ...
I don't know...
what do you think...water? ....
Please...tell me...
If you want me...to stay..
I'll give up the land...I'll give up their life...
yes, their life...
because water? ...
You are my life...
so, I want to..
I want you do drown me...
engulf me into all that you do...
But.....
only if you want me to...
I will forever be with you

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