Drowning Poem by Rebecca Hall

Drowning



My time is running out
I am going to die
All because of you

You wouldn't notice me
You would walk right past me
You HATE me

I make myself bleed
You still walk past me as if i am invisible
Do you realize I bleed for you?

I try to make myself skinny
You stare at me as though you are criticizing my body
Do you realize I throw up all my food for you?


But you persecute me with your words
And actions

And I am drowning
In my own blood
All because of YOU.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Serenity Prayer 24 June 2009

it is very hard to not try to change and please other people, but always remember that no matter how the world sees us, God always sees us as beautiful, even though were all sinners.

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(: God's Wild Child :) 03 June 2008

don't change yourself for a guy. if you change yoourself for a guy then what becomes of you. don't lose yourself just bcuz of a guy. I know you can get thru this. And I knw you love him but if its not meant to be then its not meant to be, dont dwel on it. that just brings u down deeper. Have faith in God to bring you your true love. You'll have true love one day, but you have to go thru many guys to find the one thats right for you. Dont give up and as for your habit, don't let it get to u youra beautiful girl and im not just saying that as your friend, I MEAN IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! even if u dont think u are, U R! ! ! and u are loved, by many ppl. Don't punish yourself for something u think u did. I'm here 4 u Becca. Stay strong and im praying for u. And u know my number so talk to me anytime u need me, or just to talk. lylas. always.

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