Dreams Poem by Amberrrr gordon

Dreams



I hear you in my dreams.
you whisper only words iknow.
Your arms tower over me i've never felt so safe.
you kiss me oh so softly, my lips turn into a smile.
then its time for you to go, you can only stay a while.
you dont say a word you just lock your eyes with mine,
you take me by the hand so were inter-twined.
i awaken to find myself alone in my room.
it's time to get back to life and stop thinking of you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terence Nabbs 19 October 2009

hello amberrrr a lovely poem for one so young is this someone you admire from a distance for such mature feelings if so good luck, terry

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John Knight 19 October 2009

Hi Amber - a lovely poem from a very lovely girl. Very emotive for one so young but at your age I did dream similar dreams about love. Your Poem is so so gentle 'Whispered words' 'Soft kisses' 'Locked eyes' 'Inter-twined hands' and in the morning just beautiful thoughts. I loved it and score it TEN for TEN-DERNESS. Keep in touch Love in Poetry - JOHN.

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Obinna Eruchie 19 October 2009

Dreams of him, she has been having so good to be true. It is time, as she decides to move on by forgetting about him.

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