Dream Poem by Heather Devlin

Dream

Rating: 3.8


dont look at me through eyes that see.
but eyes that feel instead.
i sit and cry.
i never try.
im fading like the dead.
look to the past to see the truth
of what is soon to come.
i run and hide and close my heart
wishing the pain was gone.
imagine me happy again,
because of only one.
invisible to me for now.
but soon the day will come.
when this person will appear
and carry me away?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina PrettyBrownEyes 25 August 2005

'eyes that feel instead' my fav part. we all would be so much happier if we felt each others hearts with our eyes, instead of seeing what is on the outside. you rock

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Aashish Ameya 03 August 2005

i like the line'look to the past to see the truth'. its nice verse. otherwise poem is ok-ok.

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