Dragonfly … 08 0616 Poem by saadat tahir

Dragonfly … 08 0616

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…..of nymphs and "nereids'.


Nimbly slung from delicate wings
Floats on a breath of gentle rings

In lustrous shades as she files
colors scatter, rainbow smiles

Blithely drifting on shiny glows
Hither and tither as wind blows

Upheld arms ready to go
Up and down, along the flow

Radiant eyes glint in the light
Held so steady in her flight

An agile athlete on the ropes
Twirls and turns as she lopes

In fluttering wings the lines divide
Within the lines crystals reside

A mythical nymph she silently hides
In watery ways where she resides

She lopes and circles on easy pairs
Spring's bride; a star of fairs

Young and nubile she rises and sings
From murmuring streams with her brings

A musical air from posse of gods
Where fairies dance and nature nods



Original
saadat tahir
08th June 2k16

Friday, June 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 19 January 2017

Excellent word choices to carry the dragonfly theme- - fairs, delicate wings, lustrous shades, as she files colors scatter, rainbow smiles, drifting hither and thither as the wind blows- - -EXCEPTIONAL attention to detail! And oh how I respond to the following stanzas: . Young and nubile she rises and sings From murmuring streams with her brings . A musical air from posse of gods Where fairies dance and nature nods . An exciting introduction to your poems! ! ! Cab't wait to read more!

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Bharati Nayak 04 July 2016

Nicely woven words and beautiful rhyme scheme makesthe poem a delightful reading.

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Yasmin Khan 25 June 2016

A delightful poem in admiration of a dragonfly. How keenly you have observed it or recalled from your childhood.

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Shreej K.c 18 June 2016

I have always been fascinated by the dragonfly and of course tried to catch one when I was a child! Lovely couplets with such details. Enjoyed it :)

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Leonard Dabydeen 17 June 2016

A beautiful sonnet, with interestingly enjoyable rhyming couplets. You have painted the 'dragonfly' with sensitive imagery, bringing it flawlessly to life in your reader's mind. Enjoy the read. ~ Leonard Dabydeen

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