Dream Of Desire....Unrequited Love Poem by saadat tahir
Dream Of Desire....Unrequited Love
Us
Thus
We make our dream
So serene
Chiffon fluttering breeze
To life a lease
Drew I close, in awe.
I in your eyes saw.
Brim of love.
Coo of a dove.
Barefoot to you.
Took off my shoe.
You my prayer.
Stood you there.
Temple of my desire.
The steeple the spire.
Quintessence of romance.
Fulfillment of my dance.
You held my hand.
In heaven stand.
Your arms garlands.
Drawing in bands.
My being, I to the fore.
Surrender to the lure.
Burn in my loins the fires.
Seek that the sires.
Bloom therein flowers.
In Venus’ gushing showers.
As I roll to seek the flow.
Unasked twinkle of a glow.
Oh please stop, slow.
I have you though.
Moon long gone, has dimmed.
My curtains now rimmed.
The inevitable dawn.
My dream sawn.
Its now fawn.
Yes Gone.
A groan.
Moan.
You.
I.
(Islamabad)
(May 26,2009)
I love how you took this poem from beginning to end with such a great flow and rhyme. It tells a touching story of romance and love. Thank you for sharing.
My dream sawn....really excellent sir! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Dream of desire you have woven fabulously...nice rhymes both internal and end rhymes...10+++
wao great combination of rhythm & rhyme...i hv'nt any word to show my expression for this musician's type of poem...really enjoying..one of my feet starting movement up & down, down & up hmmmm
wao great combination of rhythm & rhyme...i hv'nt any word to show my expression for this musician's type of poem...really enjoying..one of my feet starting movement up & down, down & up hmmmm
Hello, Beautifully suggestive and like those dreams, this poem lingers on in your mind for a long time afterwards........
wowwwwwww...and iam saying why your poems are full of music..slow handssssss...this poem cheers me while enjoying reading it..that beauty of surrendering to the lure of a loving love....
A dream of desire written so well, good flow to this 10 Lynda xx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Great rhyme and beautiful imagery. I really admired the way after 'moon long gone has dimmed' it cleverly spans down to the left with gorgeous metaphors of passion and love. 10 Karin Anderson