# Don'T You Dare! Poem by Sonya Florentino

interesting poetic composition...........10++++++++

This sounds so like an angry denial of a yearning so very very strong...found this so very intriguing and the passion within it speaks volumes....10+

but it sneaks in like a thief in the dead of the night...: -)

why didn't she want to see him? it's like in this book i'm reading. the woman had panic attacks and ended up pushing her lover away. misery is supposed to love company but i guess this time doesn't count.

yeh ill say to like Allie this is like the lyrics of a sad song dont u darrrrrrrrrrrrreeeee whatever the flow was good

I would color this poem red. Passion, and anger crackle like flames through every stanza. Very dramatic.10/10 As always, Sandra

'Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned'. An impassioned rant against an intensely personal betrayal. This would work as the lyrics of a blues song. 'Not after I’ve wrapped my heart and made my bed' is particularly evocative. Powerful no holes bared poetry. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

When we least expect it and stop looking, it finds us on its own. So daring and ungrateful :) I loved this poem and will take it with me, thank you for sharing.