# Fatad Accident Poem by Sonya Florentino

# Fatad Accident

Rating: 3.1


There was no way to escape your smile

My heart was set in free motion

Fantasy now seems strange and distant

With our nearness creating this friction

I was starting to believe

I would never find true love

Little did I know....

How fantastic!


© 2009 Sonya Florentino

Note: I wrote this poem as an entry to a contest created by fanstory.com. The contest was to use 10 words in a poem, namely:

smile - heart - escape - fantasy - believe - little - motion - fantastic - distant - friction

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 21 December 2009

'Fantasy now seems strange and distant With our nearness creating this friction'... ten words or not, you have expressed best of your poetics especially there in the quoted line...expressions fantasy/distance and nearness/ friction showing beauitiful mutual co-operation...nice work...10

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Indira Babbellapati 17 December 2009

that's a wonderful exercise...whether prize or no prize!

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george george 08 December 2009

Wow, excellent job incorporating all those random words! Reading it, you would never think it was forced or contrived. Very good Sonya!

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Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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