Don't Leave Me Here Poem by Chris Mackie

Don't Leave Me Here

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Darkness shrouds my house
It has no windows or doors
There is no way back in
Everything is gone
I sit here cliff side
Unable to turn back
Afraid of what lies ahead
Looking down at unknown light
I call out...
'Don't Leave Me Here! '


Copyright Chris Mackie 18/06/2008

Wednesday, June 18, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: abandoned,alone,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salu Salu 10 November 2008

Quite touching! ! ! vibrantl emulation of pain in the murmur. I love that utterance, I remember, Hugh Maurns too. keep writing..............rgrds/salu

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James Timothy Jarrett 04 October 2008

Very dark and moving. .

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Emancipation Planz 18 June 2008

Inspirational...... hee hee.... aroha PS tomato has been sourced.

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