~do You Remember When.........? ~ Poem by Mary Nagy
~do You Remember When.........? ~
They sat hidden in the shadows
and talked amongst themselves.
I doubt they would've noticed
if their servers had been elves.
He was entangled in her beauty
and the things that she would say.
There were moments interrupted
but he never looked away.
The waiter took their orders
and he served them both their meals.
I couldn't help but envy them...
''I remember how that feels...''
To feel the world is spinning
just for the both of you.
Everything's exciting
and there's nothing you won't do.
If only we could bottle
all the passion of those years
to use when it is needed most
to help wash off the tears.
Sometimes it seems impossible
to feel as we did then.
Perhaps we can go back there.
Do you ''Remember when...''?
Mary I think I have been cold of heart recently and now I know why. It is a symptom of Mary Nagy Poem Withdrawl. As per usual Mary you take a magic moment and enhance it even more. This is a lovely piece. I really can not say anything else.
I remember those moments interrupted but never noticed! What a joyous time in our lives, and how cleverly you have made me go back in time....to remember~
Just delicious! A plate full of memories. Love Ernestine XXX
bottle then and save them for later...open and have a swing...wow...but how i wish it could be that easy...love...nalini...ten for the bottle! !
Beautifully written and so touching - I am sure we all have memories we would like to preserve and keep forever...lovely piece... Take care. Joey
This is a poem of quality, just like the poetess that shared such words Love duncan X
One of the most touching poem I have ever read. Mary, you do know how to touch people's hearts.... Wonderful... love, Anjana
its a beautiful poem and i still remember those magical days with my husband. thank you for this wonderful work.
I remember it, just now. Thanks for the help in doing so. A truly wonderful poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Mary, this is possibly one of the most touching (and accurate and get-you-right-there and excellently written) pieces I have ever read. Thank you for posting. This is one to treasure. t x