Do You Remember Poem by Alison Smith

Do You Remember

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Do you remember the day
You told him that you cared
When everything seemed so simple

Do you remember the day
When he told you that he cared
When he asked you to be his bride

Do you remember the day
You told him he was to be a dad
He shouted the bar that night

Do you remember the day
He came home in tears
No you wouldn't
You had already left.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 11 February 2007

Beautiful piece - well contructed, a great subject and a brilliant conclusion. Clever as well as poignant. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxx

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David Harris 10 February 2007

Alison, a beautiful little piece very poignant, especially the last lines. Another great poem. Keep up the good work. David

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Jim Foulk 09 February 2007

beautiful piece of poetry. well penned, well said.

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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