Love, Lust Longing Poem by Alison Smith

Love, Lust Longing

Rating: 5.0


Love you with a deep desire
Lust for you with my whole being
Long for you to hold me close
Longing and lust my lover.

Desire your arms about me
Deep within me I quiver
Don’t deny me your loving
Deep desire you just cant deny.

Touch me so gently
Taste my want so strong
Tremble my body now lover
Touch, taste and tremble

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 22 August 2007

Alison, you've lit fire with this one to warm me on this chilly August morn. Another Gr-r-r-reat write my friend. Nice to see you penning regularly again. Top marks and thanks for sharing my friend. David

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x... x... 22 August 2007

A passionate write full of longing and truth and written so eloquently and still hot, hot, hot. love it Alison.~~marci. :) ~~

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Poison 9901 22 August 2007

This one definitaly has a sizzle about it. It can be taken many ways. Very nice read. Thanks 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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beam_of_passion 08 September 2019

I fell so much in love with this poem, I created an illustration: https:youtu.be9iV8ZORQHDI

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beam_of_passion 08 September 2019

Check it out here https:youtu.be9iV8ZORQHDI

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beam_of_hope 08 September 2019

https:youtu.be9iV8ZORQHDI

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beam_of_hope 08 September 2019

I was really in love with it I decided to create an illustration.https:youtu.be9iV8ZORQHDI

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Steven S 28 August 2009

I love the allusion brought to the poem by the word tremble...

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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