Divine Pencil Poem by Hira Akhtar

Divine Pencil

Rating: 5.0


I'm being doodled over the book of life
Take hold of the pencil of Your mercy
Sketch me into a drenched flower, o Friend!
And colour in me the colour of You

Wednesday, May 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: divinity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Allah❤❤
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 24 December 2019

Write comment. Such a beautiful piece of work, Hira. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 30 June 2019

What a nice pencil it is! The poem portrays the poet's poetic genius, a clever poet, as His pencil does. Wonderful poem. Dear poetess.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 May 2019

Sketch me into a drenched flower, o friend! What a brilliant poetic expression! I find a great power in this little piece of poetry of just 4 lines! Appreciated the way it is penned in its absolute brevity and compactness...........10

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Hira Akhtar 22 May 2019

Thank you, Sir!

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