Disturbed Poem by Theresa Peters

Disturbed



My mind is crowded
My visions are obscured
I've lost sight of my goals
I'm at a place that no one knows
This lonely place
I wish to escape
There is no peace within
Just confusion all around
I have lost my stance
Fallen to the ground
I have done some things
I'm not proud
I've chosen the crowd
And now I am all alone
Left to drown in my sorrows
Will there be a brighter tomorrow?
No one knows
For tomorrow holds a tale that's untold

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gary Kedron 03 January 2013

great words..... maybe not tomorrow..... it comes if you look for it, just when it does.

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Joshua Fegley 03 January 2013

Dark and depressing but very good. Write some more.

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