Died Poem by audrina lucero

Died

Rating: 4.5


DIED.........
Why is it soo hard
to let go of all your
family, friends, love ones
your soul mate and
your life............
sometimes you just want to let go
but you dont know how because of
everything you have or maybe don't have.........That
why you probably want to die and see who
cares for you and who dont

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Lucero 24 January 2010

Audrina, Nice write...wisdom the belies your tender years. Peace, Ray Lucero

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Greenwolfe 1962 24 June 2008

This is really a treasure of a writing. I don't believe it has been said many times, and if it has, not too well. This is not exactly the best, but it is real good. I gave it the 9 it deserves. GW62

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