Miroslava Odalovic

Rookie - 45 Points (Montenegro)

Did You Ever Know I Was A Child - Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

My cry your smile
My tears your cups
My hunger your belly dance
My hands like sticks
Wave your campaign flags
Your knives & your stabs

Did you ever know I was a child


Comments about Did You Ever Know I Was A Child by Miroslava Odalovic

  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (2/16/2012 5:03:00 AM)

    So u was a child? i thought you was born as adult hahahaha joking!
    i like the tones there in every line fade from black to white, contrast i mean
    but it really have deep meaning...and victory at the end, anyway i m glad
    that i know you was a child before same to me hahahaha joking again_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 16, 2012



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