Did You? Poem by Vi Lanflagle

Did You?

Rating: 5.0


Did you really mean everything you said?
Was it all a lie?
Or was it just pretend?

Did you really mean to hurt me?
Do you really not care?
I can't believe i couldn't see
Thought you'd always be right there.

Was it just a game to you?
Do you not care what you might do?
No matter how much we pretend
We both know nothing will ever be the same.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyease Collins 01 July 2008

Wow awesome poem Im sorry that happened with you and your friend...i hope it all turned out alright. ^_^ Tyease

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Bell Song 28 August 2007

I like the honesty and immediacy of this one.

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