Detention Poem by Petros Papadopoulos,
Detention
I am,
your last priority
waiting,
on your everlasting
waiting list
to get
some attention
too much tension
like detention
and a lack of air
to breathe!
Dedicated to Sophia my love!
Beautiful train of thought, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and elegantly brought forth with insight. Lovely love poem written with conviction. Thanks for sharing Petros.
Thank you very much for you comment! I am happy that you liked the poem!
Thanks for your poem - It felt tense and I'm assuming tention is a typo for tension. Sounds like you have experienced the pain of waiting for another and their love for you
I feel relief to express my emotional pain though a poem or a drawing. Definitely love can be very intense! (The poem be updated shortly with no typo mistakes) . Thank you very much for you comment!
Interesting, but what does the word 'tention' mean? This appears to be the first poem that you have posted to this website. Welcome to Poem Hunter!
Thank you very much. I am going to correct the typo mistake.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/2/2024 9:44:09 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Lovely poem. As powerful as the thing called love!