Desire Poem by Paul Storm

Desire

Rating: 4.8


i only want

you untamed

every two weeks

or so

after that

we become

doormats

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kushal Poddar 17 February 2008

this is restrained truth revealed by a poet with a vission.

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Riquetta Elliott 21 February 2008

A revealing experience. Good work.

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Manonton Dalan 25 September 2008

sireless feelings.... wooo...woooo... go get it while still hot. powerful poem. thanks.md

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 September 2008

Wonderfully expressed desire. I love it and added my 10 to it.

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Roland Bastien 19 April 2008

repeatitive patterns undo meaning desire is no longer a matter it dressed the robe of no reality

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Tired of Being Exploited 03 April 2008

Sounds like marriage to me.

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Minnu Serah 01 March 2008

excellent one... makes me ponder 4 hours

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