Disco Kings Poem by Paul Storm

Disco Kings

Rating: 4.3


saturday night cruising
going nowhere but
one last 2am disco stop

letting loose
on the empty dance floor
running in circles

the remaining crowd
glance casually
at our tribal dance

then onto the speakers
reserved for dancing girls
we claim the world
and rock it out

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Butters 15 April 2008

Like good old John Revolting, sorry, Travolta eh? I get the feel of a disco here from your lines, tho like Smiffy I was a wallflower (an ugly one at hat) . Paul.

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Tired of Being Exploited 03 April 2008

Hell yeah! Been booted from a couple clubs for that offense. Girls only on the Woofers! Fascist bouncers.

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Bill Smith 10 February 2008

wish I had the confidence to get out there and dance, more of a foot tapper, more power to their twinkling feet smiffy

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