Deeply Broken Poem by Sandra Feldman

Deeply Broken

Rating: 5.0


Feelings that go further,
But where
Till when,
How much can we care?
When broken by care,
You become just empty
From caring, too much,
With no place to go,
No one to care,
You stare
Into the limpid pool
Of Time,
But there's no reflection,
There.

Saturday, March 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: deep,solitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 02 March 2019

Wonderful poem, you just inspired me again my friend

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 March 2019

A well crafted poem, dear Sandra....10++++++++++

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