Deepest Love Poem by Sandra Feldman

Deepest Love

Rating: 5.0


If my hand were to touch yours,
Would then all the Stars explode?
If my eyes were to meet yours,
Would the Seas have overflowed?
If my love were even deeper,
Than the deepest roots of Trees,
Would you then believe I love you,
With this love that could not be,
That forever will be silent,
In the deepest part of me.

Saturday, December 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eugene Levich 17 December 2014

Sandra, you write beautifully on many subjects... but on love best of all!

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Bill Cantrell 15 December 2014

what a wonderful poem, this has deep meaning dressed with dignity and true poetic emotion! ! Very good as usual.

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Daniel Brick 15 December 2014

This is a beautiful poem, and it truly comes from the depest part of you and reaches the deepest part of the reader. It is also sad, very sad that this true will never be an actual love. Unrequited love is such a trickster, making a mockery of our sincerity. But on the other side of things, that sadness of an unrealized love has refined the heart of the lover, made him or her a much better person, and inspired the Imagination to write this beautiful poem. This may feel like a bitter irony but it is actually a glorious irony. (Rumi would like this poem.)

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Tanya Gupta 14 December 2014

deepest love, , really deeply touched me.. keep writing

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