Deep Into The Night Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Deep Into The Night

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"Deep into the night...
my mind is still mixed up
from thoughts of you
that for a long time
I finally had the chance
to talked to you
and thinking of the years
that passed between us
the first time I saw you
was a day full of remembrance
as it started with your
beautiful smile and lovely eyes
that in your daily walks
in the morning and afternoon
from your everyday work
it was the most precious times I had
for the winds and trees joined
in seeing a most wonderful sight
for you have become my dream,
my joy and my most beautiful forever...
that when I have you in my life
I remember all the things
we talked and shared about
for ours was a perfect song
that we gave all our hearts
with nothing to hold
even if our past has slowly
faded into the stars
yet it's flickering lights
will always remind us
of the love we had."

Saturday, July 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 28 July 2018

Mind is mixed up with deepness of night with hope of light to merge within dream. Most precious time is realized with wind and trees to do duty next day morning as fresh day begins. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned with nice perspectives...10

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Jesus Llorico 28 July 2018

Thank you for a very nice comment Mr Kumarmani Mahakul, really appreciate it a lot.

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