Deep Fall Poem by Ausaaf Karjikar

Deep Fall



No words where to start
In my current condition im torn apart,
Covered in thick blood
As I drenched from the mighty flood,

Worked hard day and night
That during the war,
Was overwhelmed by fright

That my fright is to be blamed
Why I lost the war,
But the battle is still not over
As my inner self gets ready
To Raawwrr! ! !

Made a decision to sharpen my blade
To show my soon dead opponents,
Of what I was made

To throw my best
Is what I planned to do,
But without the rest
of my allies
what am I supposed to do! !

But currently I am to withstand a crisis
That lay upon my head,
Which comes with heavy prices
That I am ready to shed,

Deep fall is what I witnessed then
Into the dark,
Not even a call
As I alone rode this
Lonely yak,

Kept on riding it with all my strength
Up the rising slope,
Alas! ! I did see at the end of the tunnel
A spark of hope,

Will not give up
Until I reach the end,
To elevate my skills
As I am to ascend,

Following my ascension
I overwhelmed with confidence,
But keeping my deep fall in mind
Reminded me of its consequence,

Kept myself calm
Like the everlasting blue ocean,
But inside I raged
But outside my emotions stayed frozen,

With the outbreak of the war
For the second time,
Fought till my last breath
For 3 hours
Keeping my past behind,

Finally emerging victorious
After the war,
Honoured with an armour of bravery
For what I stood for,

The moral may be unclear,
But if you look inside, it's you
Who has to rise against your own fear,

Deep fall is what you will witness at times
Into the dark,
As it is upto you to alone ride
This lonely yak,

Saturday, March 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: courage,examination,graduate,graduation,hardship,motivation,positiveness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem deals not only the current situation experienced by the students during their exams
but also exhibits the never give up attitude one possess and its consequences and results.
That how in the end after continuous and consistent hard work one experiences the taste of success.

The title DEEP FALL is assigned due to the acknowlegment of the fact that success
comes due to prior experience in failures that one suffers, through which one can learn a
lesson and thus makes it as his/her strength.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 17 April 2017

Everlasting blue ocean.... a pleasure to read....

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 March 2017

A victorious start. Thanks.

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