Stella Nicole Gopal

Rookie - 0 Points (02/07/1996 / Harare)

Deceiver! ! ! ! - Poem by Stella Nicole Gopal

His snaked words,
venomous poison her soul,
he made her need him,
became her sun,
her only guide in this world,
so it seemed,
when she bowed to his will,
changed how she was,
to please her commander,
hated him but didn't notice,
he carelessly trod her heart,
she lay at his feet,
was blind to the tears,
that strained their trail on her cheek,
she was no one special,
he didn't need to care,
but found a selfish comfort,
in the fact she'd always be there,
he is her angel...of darkness,
disguised in a false light,
a slave to her image of him,
kept by occasional lies,
he suffocates her heart,
in his deadly embrace,
destroys her,
as he cradles her in his arms,
thus she is doomed,
locked in his tomb of herself,
never to be loved,
but to alternate love

Comments about Deceiver! ! ! ! by Stella Nicole Gopal

  • Rookie Subrat Pradhan Love-immortal (7/21/2012 5:27:00 AM)

    One sided love will surely the pathway to doom. well written. try reading my poems. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 123 Points Norman Hale (7/6/2012 10:58:00 PM)

    nicely written from the heart (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,792 Points Godfrey Morris (6/20/2012 7:16:00 PM)

    You have powerful expressions in your words... Lovely (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 19, 2012

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