Dearest Once Again Poem by Aiden Florence

Dearest Once Again



I did it again
It's because I still love you
I can't admit it to myself
And definitely not to you

Scream
Again
It's the pain I live with

Afraid
Memories
It's what I can't forget

I stand at this campaign
Unable to complain
Holding this champagne
As I try to explain
Again and again
How much I want to be with you
And I'm about to go insane

So lost
And miserable
It's too much to take

The pain
of heartbreak
It's not what I wanted

I did it again
Standing outside of your door
Hoping you'd let me in
And love me like you did back when

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The emotion is raw, as if its a real life lived experience. Its strong, but in some stanza's could be alot stronger, i dont think it was a fail, i think it was a very impressive and much needed poem that should be read more.

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Catrina Heart 23 November 2009

sad one yet well expressed feelings.......great read! ! !

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