Dead For Lover Requests Poem by Aiden Florence

Dead For Lover Requests

Rating: 5.0


Don’t say anything
That’ll make me break again.

The truth cuts so deep
More than anything you ever felt in your life
Tears falling
Emotions shattering
And endless dejection
Until you realize
Your cutting yourself with your own gun

Never again would I tell the truth
If this is the outcome I have to live through

There’s no false apology
I did my part
It’s up to you to do the rest.

So come back with me
To where this all began
So we can leave this place
And never have to go through it again

Like you care…..that’s not what you wanted….

Take my knife
And stab it through my heart
That’ll show you what you wanted…
Me dead so you can revel in peace

Here I am
Lying dead
Cut me all you want
I can’t grant your wish again
I’m dead
That was your request
Enjoy it now
Till your hearts content
At least I’m free now
I won’t have to see myself in anguish ever again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

'an endless dejection' wow strong words.. i like it.. well done x3, mill

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Niky M 01 July 2008

wow i like this one nicely done ^_^ Niky~

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Sandy nobody 01 July 2008

good poem aiden....deserves a 10..keep writing

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Serenity Prayer 03 July 2008

i love it. its excellent. great job!

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Aarif Ameen 08 April 2009

Thats so nice good luck i liked it

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Aarif Ameen 08 April 2009

Thats so nice good luck i liked it

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Suicidal Magic 04 April 2009

yea 'Ouch' i like it a lot! ; ]

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Casey Gauthier 12 July 2008

it makes me think 'ouch.' very well done. :)

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Lilly Mandrell 04 July 2008

You were kidding right? It was amazing.

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